"Colleen -
This is a great mural to study and I appreciate you selection of it - and you made an effort to contextualize both the artist and the mural - I am quite concerned, however, that as a senior and an art history major that you display very little knowledge or expertise in art history in writing papers and doing research and in paper citations. This is still at a 1st draft stage. Maybe you put off your work until the last minute as you said you did with your studying. Whatever the reason, this paper needs alot of work on every level: content, organization, grammar, spelling, syntax, endnotes, and index citations, etc."
Stupid bitch.